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annie_mial
annie_mial Member Posts: 5,614
edited 26. Nov 2009, 16:25 in Community Chit-chat archive
I wrote a poem about my cat a couple of weeks ago - here it is, feel free to comment (I'm no Wordsworth)

She's cute and she's funny and so very furry
She's stripey and pretty and so very purry
Peering and peeping she makes life exciting -
Sneaking and sliding, and sometimes just fighting!

You'd think in her old age that she'd settle down some
- but life is too busy; she's been around some
Foxes and magpies and things that go whirring!
Waking the neighbours when they're just a-stirring.

But when life gets too much she comes in for a cuddle
and I do it, although she's just sat in a puddle -
She snuggles up 'cos she knows where it's at
She's my special gremlin - she's Tillie the Cat!

Hope you like it!

Annie

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  • annebr
    annebr Member Posts: 730
    edited 30. Nov -1, 00:00
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    Annie,

    As a cat lover and owner I thnk your poem is lovely.

    Anne
  • joanlawson
    joanlawson Member Posts: 8,681
    edited 30. Nov -1, 00:00
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    Hi Annie

    That was really lovely. I could imagine her from your words.

    Joan
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  • gickygawky
    gickygawky Member Posts: 478
    edited 30. Nov -1, 00:00
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    Wonderful!
    Just the sort of thing I would write about my naughty kitty cats!

    Thanks for sharing!

    A x :D
  • trisher
    trisher Member Posts: 9,263
    edited 30. Nov -1, 00:00
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    Annie

    That is lovely well done you.

    Trish xxx
  • skezier
    skezier Member Posts: 11,333
    edited 30. Nov -1, 00:00
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    Hi Annie,

    Just had to post to say how good that is :D My slave driving special gremlins want to know why I have never done a nice one about them......... If you knew them you'd know the answer :wink:

    You take care and well done, Cris x
  • annie_mial
    annie_mial Member Posts: 5,614
    edited 30. Nov -1, 00:00
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    Thank you all very much - I've gone all hot and bothered :oops:

    Annie
  • debbierose
    debbierose Member Posts: 403
    edited 30. Nov -1, 00:00
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    I'm not a kitty lover but I can see her as she is from your lovely poem.
    I bet she a devil. and brings you allsorts of little present like dead birds and mice.
  • suncatcher
    suncatcher Member Posts: 2,174
    edited 30. Nov -1, 00:00
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    lOVED THE POEM GOOD TO SEE WE HAVE SOME NEW POETS ON THE FORUM FROM JOANNE
    Joanne
  • trisher
    trisher Member Posts: 9,263
    edited 30. Nov -1, 00:00
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    joanneprice wrote:
    lOVED THE POEM GOOD TO SEE WE HAVE SOME NEW POETS ON THE FORUM FROM JOANNE

    JOANNE

    HAVE YOU DONE ANYMORE POEMS YET?

    TRISHER XX
  • annie_mial
    annie_mial Member Posts: 5,614
    edited 30. Nov -1, 00:00
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    joanneprice wrote:
    lOVED THE POEM GOOD TO SEE WE HAVE SOME NEW POETS ON THE FORUM FROM JOANNE

    Thank you, Joanne. I don't often get inspiration, but I enjoy it when it pops up.

    Annie
  • jaspercat
    jaspercat Member Posts: 1,238
    edited 30. Nov -1, 00:00
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    Hi Anne,

    Loved your poem, I read it to Jasper, my cat, he seemed suitably impressed, he will want me to write one for him next love Jaspercatxx
  • woodbon
    woodbon Member Posts: 4,969
    edited 30. Nov -1, 00:00
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    A really lovely poem - brought a tear to my eye, but I don't know why. I've got 5 cats, love them all!! Love Sue
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