Nonsence!
skezier
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Nonsense!
The snow’s got me down, it all such a pain,
Its even got me hoping for rain,
To wash it away and stop the ice,
I even think the swamp would be nice,
Cus that’s what it will do and no mistake,
On all my walk ways and every gate,
Today I forgot in my head I am free,
And able to go sit by the old oak tree,
In the meadow of grass where there is no rain,
To stay long enough, dream and to forget pain,
You can all come with and there we shall all play,
5 a side and splat the rat, hey lets have a fun day,
We can enjoy our selves and run a mock,
I might even borrow that hat and the frock,
Covered in flowers and of course straw in the hat,
Now how can I be sad when I got all that?
Please come with cus your all real friends,
But as me to go in water and swim kinda depends,
Yet I will happily swing from rope up in the tree,
To fly like a bird and fell at last free,
For the long grass Page has trays, I got a mat,
I am off there now so I guess that’s about that!
The snow’s got me down, it all such a pain,
Its even got me hoping for rain,
To wash it away and stop the ice,
I even think the swamp would be nice,
Cus that’s what it will do and no mistake,
On all my walk ways and every gate,
Today I forgot in my head I am free,
And able to go sit by the old oak tree,
In the meadow of grass where there is no rain,
To stay long enough, dream and to forget pain,
You can all come with and there we shall all play,
5 a side and splat the rat, hey lets have a fun day,
We can enjoy our selves and run a mock,
I might even borrow that hat and the frock,
Covered in flowers and of course straw in the hat,
Now how can I be sad when I got all that?
Please come with cus your all real friends,
But as me to go in water and swim kinda depends,
Yet I will happily swing from rope up in the tree,
To fly like a bird and fell at last free,
For the long grass Page has trays, I got a mat,
I am off there now so I guess that’s about that!
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well u made me want to get long white cotten dress out with ribbon around the waist my hat with the wide brim so i can come and sit by the river bank with u in the summer breeze thanks for the fredom your words evoked (think that right)val0
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Oh Valval. that was lovely.
It took me away on a memory reading that. It will be a hard act to follow.
I think you have started a poetry contest here, what do you think?
Joy0 -
Lovely poem - not sure I'd wear a dress with a ribbon tied round me, but would definitely join you guys in shorts :-)
And poetry contest? I think we already have the winner, don't we?
Nx0 -
Thats a lovely poem..... I could feel the warm sun, a gentle breeze blowing, the river gurgling along its merry way........
Thank you!
Jackie x0 -
That was lovely.Got me thinking of the buttercup field I used to have at bottom of garden.My Charlotte used to hide in them as taller than her!In those days we would go for a walk everyday!
ElizabethNever be bullied into silence.
Never allow yourself to be made a victim.
Accept no ones definition of your life
Define yourself........
Harvey Fierstein0 -
Wonderful poem, wish I could fire peoples imagination like that.
Linda0 -
Hey we have a thaw, a real thaw...... got almost as much grass as slush but will have to go back into the Hunters and my feet ain't going to like it........
Hi Val,
You were up very late...... I wish that didn't happen to us!
Oh the dress....... Well mine the one the sheep wares in the cafe (if Toni's not nicked it) so I kinda think your would be smarter....... Sheep just don't look after their clothes((( ))) Cris x
Hi Joy,
I'm glad you came with to the meadow. Hope your feeling a bit better today? ((( ))) Cris x0 -
Hi Nina,
I am no poet, and yet I still post them
Hey how is your writing course going? I sort of think about doing one cus I do love writing......... my ability is debatable but I am enthusiasticHope your recovered form you birthday? Cris x
Hi Jackie,
He may be straining on the chain but he can't escape((( ))) Cris x
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Hi Elizabeth,
Oh bless her I can sort of picture her, she have clothing slightly more old fashioned thoughI'm glad you came with cus we need to now and then eh? I am so relived to have actual water in the ice pool that is the troughs
Its coming up country as well on a fairly stiff south-easterly! ((( ))) Cris x and buttercups for Lucy
and not forgetting Charlotte
Hi Linda,
Now I said back along I couldn’t do poetry and Joanne, bless her, said give it a try so maybe you could as well? Hope your warmer and the dogs are all ok? Cris x0 -
Hi Cris!
Lovely poem
Daisy and I are on our way! We will bring some food and our wellies just incase
Well done for the poem
Just what we needed
Love
Toni xx0 -
Hi Toni,
Oh I'm glad she is coming tooHey have you got the flowery dress or has she? I can't remember now........ and you know my eye sights been iffy...... she is still in 2 aprons though :roll: xxx
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If we're playing 5-a-side Cris, can I be goalie?
Well done ....a poem to lift spirits.
Luv LegsLove, Legs x
'Make a life out of what you have, not what you're missing'0 -
Hi Skezier......you have a real way with words
Your poem took me to such a wonderful place......think I will awhile.......watch the sun set from under the Oak.........
Look forward to more of your words.......to lift the spirits and and carry us into Spring with happy hearts.........
Love Indigo xxx0 -
Hi Chris
I'm fully recovered from my birthday now, thanks :-)
The creative writing course is going well, just handed in assignment 2 out of 6 last Friday. I only have this year and next left to complete my degree.
I'm doing my course through the Open University, why don't you have a look at their website for ideas? I've done the level 2 creative writing course and am doing the level 3 one this year and really enjoying it.
Nx0 -
Hi Lynn,
Thanks for bringing the Hardwick as well, she is lovely and i wonder could I keep her please
Love and warm ((( ))) and West Cornwall sunsetsCris xx
Oh Legs,
You can be goalie and I could be a striker pleaseIs he still up barking at your ice?
Its snowing really hard here but its left it too late, the rain came first and it can't stick HAH!!!!!!!!! You don't know how pleased I am
Love ((( )))'s and another West Cornwall sunset
Cris xxx
Hi Indigo,
Ah now the sunset thing, well the meadow does the best, be they ours or the ones you get up thereCris x
Hi Nina,
I shall go and lookThanks for the info and thanks for bringing that fireman!
Cris x
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skezier wrote:Hi Toni,
Oh I'm glad she is coming tooHey have you got the flowery dress or has she? I can't remember now........ and you know my eye sights been iffy...... she is still in 2 aprons though :roll: xxx
sorry :oops:
Will bring it with us
Toni x0 -
Hi Toni,
She did say you already had it but you can't always belive herxx
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Cris yet again you write a lovely poem which every one feels the same way as I do lifts our spirits up, please keep them coming
I hope you are keeping warm & well
Sue xx[/code]0 -
Hi Cris.
your poem is lovely
it made me thing of my younger days.
it will be nice when the snows gone.
look after your self and keep warm.
joan xxtake care
joan xx0 -
Hi Sue,
We were so lucky last night and got some rain here and its warmer, the outside taps have thawed and the troughs are even melting! Its only 1 degree but after the last week it feels so much warmerHope you have the same your way? It will be there soon if not. Luv and ((( ))) Cris x
Hi Joan,
Thanks for the fleece, I will wash it before \I give it back. You ok there? Luv Cris x0 -
Hi Cris
Love your poem, I even found the switch for a while, but think my wiring might be faulty!! :oops: Will try again soon. Hope you have had a better day now you have bread AND rain.I would do the swimming bit but not the swinging on a rope, too chicken for that even before arther.
You have a real talent, just wish we could convince you eh!
take care
Chris xx0 -
as always great poem cris
ive got me trays ready and me swimming cossie
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Hi Chris,
Tell you what you do my swimming and I'll do your tree swinging...... I'm often a little too good at tree swingingIt was a better day
I sort of lost it yesterday...... I hid it so well eh? :oops: :oops: I used this actually to lift me up as well. Then the troughs are not frozen today
I never knew how much ice breaking with a hammer (not forgetting a pounder) could take it out of you........... Glad you found the switch and its still there so you will find it again if not Velcro will give you a quick jump start. ((( ))) Cris xx
Hi Page,
Can we do a really intricate one please? I've read up on them...... I shall set aside some long grass as a practice area soonYou ok up there? Bubbles and ((( ))) and sun xx
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