poem inspired by my son

martina
martina Member Posts: 14
edited 5. Mar 2010, 07:37 in Community Chit-chat archive
HI my son was getting ready for fancy dress and made me think and smile this morning in a strange way and i wanted to share this with you all hope you dont mind very low at moment .
THE SCARECROW UNDERSTOOD ME
Hello to the scarecrow
1 position he stood all day
leaned up against a post
there he was made to stay
unable to bend his arms
his knees or touch his toes
was he in any pain
who cares hes a scarecrow
well i talk to my friend
cause he knows how i feel
not knowing who to talk to
having others afraid of you
i cant touch my toes
or do the things others do
THANKYOU MR SCARECROW FOR FEELING MY PAIN 2

first time writing on here really knocks ya for six this illness ay thanks 2 you for your comments you put on here been a great help

Comments

  • skezier
    skezier Member Posts: 11,333
    edited 30. Nov -1, 00:00
    Hi Martina,

    Nice to meet you and that’s very good :D This bone thing does knock you all over the place but sometimes just writing something down can help and this lot here are so good at supporting an 'seeing' both you and your pain as well. I am glad you have posted and hope things will feel easier for you soon. You take good care and I sending you a ((( ))) and well-done for the poem. Cris
  • snowball
    snowball Member Posts: 3,465
    edited 30. Nov -1, 00:00
    Hi Martina welcome to the forum what a lovely poem, they are a really great and supportive on here and heres a ((((hug)))) from me.
    Julie x
    ((((hugs)))) n xxxxx to ya all
  • frogmorton
    frogmorton Member Posts: 30,087
    edited 30. Nov -1, 00:00
    Hi Martina

    Very good and very symbolic poem. Thank you for posting it.

    I ams sorry you are low at the moment and I hope that feeling doesn't last.

    Please keep posting - you are very welcome here.

    Love

    Toni xx
  • martina
    martina Member Posts: 14
    edited 30. Nov -1, 00:00
    frogmorton wrote:
    Hi Martina

    Very good and very symbolic poem. Thank you for posting it.

    I ams sorry you are low at the moment and I hope that feeling doesn't last.

    Please keep posting - you are very welcome here.

    Love

    Toni xx
    Hi How great is that, within minutes i receive hugs and understanding. When i feel lonley like my scarecrow friend again ,which is often latley i know where to come. THANKYOU for your kind words hope a smile is in your day today, like you put a smile in mine. martina
  • frogmorton
    frogmorton Member Posts: 30,087
    edited 30. Nov -1, 00:00
    Hi Martina

    That is what this forum is like :)

    When I first came on here - I was at my lowest and they pulled me back up - I BAWLED my eyes out :oops:

    Hearing that has made mY day too

    Keep posting :)

    Love

    Toni xx
  • angel1
    angel1 Bots Posts: 1,464
    edited 30. Nov -1, 00:00
    Oh, that poem really was right from the heart Martina.

    We can`t MAKE you better, but we can make you FEEL better.........Ange.
  • joanlawson
    joanlawson Member Posts: 8,681
    edited 30. Nov -1, 00:00
    Hi Martina

    I'm so glad that you posted your poem, and I found it very moving. I have mornings when I feel very much like a scarecrow :!: I hope you will keep posting now.
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  • chile168
    chile168 Member Posts: 384
    edited 30. Nov -1, 00:00
    Hi Martina,

    We haven't met but wanted to say WELCOME to site.

    I too think is such a lovely poem and very symbolic. I feel just like that scarecrow and glad that I have the people on this forum to depend on for support.

    Martina, have you posted it in the Young's People's Forum? I think is so nice and a good way of explaining things to the very young and little members of this lovely site.

    Hope to see you posting in other forums. Thank you for sharing the poem.

    Love and hugs x

    Eve
  • Wonkylegs
    Wonkylegs Member Posts: 3,504
    edited 30. Nov -1, 00:00
    HI Martina,

    well that is wonderful ... well done!!!

    You should maybe think of entering it in the Arthritis Care creative writing competition because this year's theme is 'a letter to my pain' and you seem to be writing just that!

    If you go to the 'get involved' tab above and then click on 'online cmmunity' then you should find the info there.

    oh and welcome to the forum too! :D

    hugs
    WOnky xxx
  • skezier
    skezier Member Posts: 11,333
    edited 30. Nov -1, 00:00
    Hi Again Martina, Wonky's right there you should and writing really helps you know. Cris x

    Hey Wonky thanks for saying that I had no idea.... and this year...... I might remember to put my name on it :wink::lol: :oops:
  • suncatcher
    suncatcher Member Posts: 2,174
    edited 30. Nov -1, 00:00
    angel1 wrote:
    Oh, that poem really was right from the heart Martina.

    We can`t MAKE you better, but we can make you FEEL better.........Ange.
    To Angel
    Howdid you do your beautiful avatar i would like to have one that suits me and my personality im fed up with being a squirral can you please let me know how to do it joanne
    To
    I really loved the poem its hard to write about aiments but you have done it beautfully very moving and heartfelt. joanne
    Joanne
  • martina
    martina Member Posts: 14
    edited 30. Nov -1, 00:00
    angel1 wrote:
    Oh, that poem really was right from the heart Martina.

    We can`t MAKE you better, but we can make you FEEL better.........Ange.
    To Angel
    Howdid you do your beautiful avatar i would like to have one that suits me and my personality im fed up with being a squirral can you please let me know how to do it joanne
    To
    I really loved the poem its hard to write about aiments but you have done it beautfully very moving and heartfelt. joanne
    HI joanne thanks for your kind words feeling good today,everyone has been so kind and given me great advice.Its strange how words can be such a comfort blanket at a time when you feel so low which is the reason why i write,glad you enjoyed the comfort of my blanket as much as me .martina OH if you go on to your profile choose change avartar and theres a whole list to choose from,i did mine by mistake lol
  • martina
    martina Member Posts: 14
    edited 30. Nov -1, 00:00
    Wonkylegs wrote:
    HI Martina,

    well that is wonderful ... well done!!!

    You should maybe think of entering it in the Arthritis Care creative writing competition because this year's theme is 'a letter to my pain' and you seem to be writing just that!

    If you go to the 'get involved' tab above and then click on 'online cmmunity' then you should find the info there.

    oh and welcome to the forum too! :D

    hugs
    WOnky xxx
    THANKYOU so much i thought that competition finished ill give it a try,i never try these things but hey why not.Thankyou again and how nice it is to be welcomed to such a nice group of people.My smile never seems far away now. martina
  • barbara12
    barbara12 Member Posts: 21,281
    edited 30. Nov -1, 00:00
    Hi Martina,
    I have only just read your post, you are among friends here that do understand.
    Lots os hugs ((((((())))))and love
    You take care
    Barbara xx
    Love
    Barbara