Garbage really.....
skezier
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Moonlight gently shimmers on all your rocks,
They are all round which is unusual and a shock,
Your beach is littered in pebbles still round,
I come here for peace, its usually found,
With ghosts of the past mixed in with fear,
I often sit here and to think or shed a tear
Yet deep inside me you reach and hold
Especially at times I need to be told
Or need some comfort deep in my soul
You give me life when I feel half dead
You help me so much when I am full of dread
I hear your call when I need a break
You make me fell real and not a fake,
I shall sit here a while and look out to sea
I shall become more content with the thing that’s me
Out over the water near on a mile
The light sweeps round and makes me smile
I need to drift and sit here a bit
Cus well arthritis is making my life….. Not very nice
They are all round which is unusual and a shock,
Your beach is littered in pebbles still round,
I come here for peace, its usually found,
With ghosts of the past mixed in with fear,
I often sit here and to think or shed a tear
Yet deep inside me you reach and hold
Especially at times I need to be told
Or need some comfort deep in my soul
You give me life when I feel half dead
You help me so much when I am full of dread
I hear your call when I need a break
You make me fell real and not a fake,
I shall sit here a while and look out to sea
I shall become more content with the thing that’s me
Out over the water near on a mile
The light sweeps round and makes me smile
I need to drift and sit here a bit
Cus well arthritis is making my life….. Not very nice
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Cris
Well I think we might both agree what word I would have put there
Arthur makes me feel like sh Get off Annie I was going to sayshi Shingle :shock:
That is great Cris, do some more.
What happend to that book? Did you do it yet?0 -
Thats brill Cris please do some more.
Julie xx((((hugs)))) n xxxxx to ya all0 -
you really had me going there :!:
priceless
Iris x0 -
Hi Cris
Lovely!!
Enjoyed that thanks - the end made me smile as i did the others too.
Something about the sea isnt there....???
Love
Toni x x0 -
Well done Cris but you've spelt the title of this tread wrong ....I don't think you spell , sea, beach, or poem like that
Luv Legs XXLove, Legs x
'Make a life out of what you have, not what you're missing'0 -
thats lovely i do love nice words that make you think and feel xxI know i am a lady ,all life is a journey xx MAY xx0
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Hi Trish,
Ah that's Hilary's job Hope your feeling a bit better? ((())) xx
Hi Julie,
Glad you liked it, the one on the pc is very serious and got haunting but decided to shorted it and lighten it xx
Hi Iris,
Hey it so nearly had the word Apples and carrots? xx
Hi Jan and Toni,
When I was a kid we lived almost on a beach and it was nice to lie and hear the sea. Stormy of calm it still thundered. Good place to spend a bit of time eh? xx
Hi Legs,
Tis easy to write something but then it has to be named..... Its what my life feels like I think Having escaped the bad side effects of mtx for a while.... well.... I got them now Off for bloods in a bit and gong to ask her to do my bp and listen to the heart cus I felt as if I was dying last night.......Obviously I didn't You ok and hope you have a good day. xx
Hi Berty,
Tis good to get things out sometimes.... hope your knees dong ok and your not chasing after your physio xx
Hi Lynn,
Think it might have been my third one actually xx0 -
Great Cris.
I really like that.
Thanks
Love Kath x0 -
Hi Cris
How clever are you, that really did come from deep down in your soul...I know what you mean about the sea, not always sure what it is...but everytime I look out to sea (on holidays that is) I can really lose myself.
Please do some more
Love
Barbara xLove
Barbara0 -
skezier wrote:
Hi Legs,
Having escaped the bad side effects of mtx for a while.... well.... I got them now Off for bloods in a bit and gong to ask her to do my bp and listen to the heart cus I felt as if I was dying last night.......Obviously I didn't You ok and hope you have a good day. xx
I'm having a good day thanks Cris. Sorry to hear you were poorly last night .....are you sure it's the Mtx and nothing else? Hope she gets your bloods and helps sort you out. Take care Flower.
Luv Legs XXLove, Legs x
'Make a life out of what you have, not what you're missing'0 -
Hi Kath,
Oh so nice to see you and hope that your ok and have been better since your op?
Glad you liked it and sending a ((((( ))))) Love Cris xx
Hi Barbara,
The sea ..... this place is near Lands End and its so beautiful but some how haunting and well like the Tin Mine round the corner I go there for healing of the inner me..... I was trying to capture that feeling but its a bit battered Hey I shall go down there for real soon, do you want to come? ((( ))) Cris and a thing with the witch in her.... xx
Hi Legs,
Well I am a little unwell.... She wouldn't do the bloods and I have to go for some tests in a min and see a doctor. Hey the new doctors were lovely on the phone and she has promised me if she does nothing she will get this crohn's sorted
Glad your ok and my CV has gone to Iris as well Tween you and me I think you'll win
Luv
Cris who has just gone after a fox so not that ill.... might have lost a chicken though..... xxx0 -
HI Cris,
just catching up with things.
sorry you ahve had a bad night but so very glad that the new doctors are so good and determined to help you.
Hang in there - they will get you sorted but it will be a while maybe so we're here for you till they sort it all.
great big hugs and sorry about the chicken .... littlelegs is on her way for a bit of fox hunting
wonkyxxxx0 -
Just caught up with this, Cris............the poem is magical.
Sorry about the chicken, too. Smooth and stroke her feathers for me, poor girl. Foxes, grrrrrrr!
Annie0 -
loved the words do some more for us , hope chicken survives val
forgot to add loved the foal pics he is growing fastval0 -
hi cris, well done it was lovely.
I know your not well so sending healing ((((hugs)))) to you & a hope that your better really soon.
take care & rest up if you can,sorry about the fox taking the chicken, nasty things :x
luv debs0 -
Been popping in and out briefly today, so only just seen how unwell you are.
Please Cris, go and get something sorted. I know how scary it can be when you`re alone, and not feeling good. I send you all the healing love in the world......Ange.0 -
Hi Wonky,
Know I am too late to have caught you but glad you liked it and even gladder you had a better day than you expected. Luv slurs and a ((( ))) Cris xx
Hi Annie,
She is deeply shocked and its not looking good..... dam cubs but I am sort of hoping he learned to be scared here..... I get very animated and also set Haz after him..... he went a well but Little Legs would have been MUCH better. It gave a fright and hopefully its enough cus if it gets my Punk the blue egg layer all bets are off! ((( ))) xx
Hi Val,
Isn't she growing...... hell so is the unborn one :shock: :shock: I must be here for that one cus she needed help last year and this one is not smaller.......((())) ad a hope the win changes and gets rid of the ash. xx
Hi Debs,
Truck loads of ((( )))'s on their way back to you. xxx
Hi Ange,
I was very ill last night..... had some tests and they came back normal so it wasn't bad if it was one. Saw the new doctor and she was lovely....... Very well examined and she is writing t the gastro doc and also doing a complete blood count as well as the mtx ones next week and best of all given me really strong tablets to control the worse symptom of the crohn's.
I have a raging crohn's flare (kinda knew that) the pa is a close 2nd and I look anemic as well as poss deficient in all B's and another in fact she reckons after 3 months of crohn's this bad I am likely to be very deficient in most things so ...... Hey I will get sorted
Hey I'm ok and don't get scared Ange, been illish a long old time and well I kinda take it in my stride so don't you go worrying. Love and a ((( )))and a hope you will soon get your house back xxx
Hey I would love to do more but am running out of ideas if anyone's got any?0 -
Hi Cris
Sorry to hear you have been feeling so ill, and thanks for the latest photos of the horses and Primrose.
I liked your poem very much.
How about a poem about the foal ?
Joan0 -
Hi Joan,
Hey that's a good one I can't believe how big she is getting and well she loves me as well Mind I think the same way a dog likes a squeaky toy
I will feel better one day eh?
How are you and purrs to Tommy x0
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