You dont look sick poem

suncatcher

You don't look sick

You don't look sick someone cried
A glistened tear springs to the eye
No visual clues like walking stick,
Ignorant comment makes me sick
You’re not really qualified to say
My doctors are so please go away
You cast an eye down my body
You look up you look down
Your mouth curled, eyes frown
You look at me with disbelief
You judge me guilty, Benefit thief!
Never judge a book by its cover
Look beneath the pages you'll discover
I am genuine and really sick
Are you ignorant or just thick?
If you swapped places with me
You would understand and agree
I deserve my benefit, now taken away
Now leave me alone to enjoy my day
By Joanne price
I wrote this last year

skezier

Hi Joanne,

Very good and think they are both ignorant and thick! ((( ))) and luv Cris xx

suncatcher

skezier wrote:

Hi Joanne,

Very good and think they are both ignorant and thick! ((( ))) and luv Cris xx

some people are from joanne

hileena111

That is excellent and to the poiint

Love
Hileena

suncatcher

hileena111 wrote:

That is excellent and to the poiint

Love
Hileena

Thanks for that

fester

very good indeed Joanne, perhaps ATOS so called professionals should read it too. Not that i imagine it would make a difference.
Excellant all the same.

sanmar63

suncatcher wrote:

You don't look sick

You don't look sick someone cried
A glistened tear springs to the eye
No visual clues like walking stick,
Ignorant comment makes me sick
You’re not really qualified to say
My doctors are so please go away
You cast an eye down my body
You look up you look down
Your mouth curled, eyes frown
You look at me with disbelief
You judge me guilty, Benefit thief!
Never judge a book by its cover
Look beneath the pages you'll discover
I am genuine and really sick
Are you ignorant or just thick?
If you swapped places with me
You would understand and agree
I deserve my benefit, now taken away
Now leave me alone to enjoy my day
By Joanne price
I wrote this last year

The poem says it all, my favorite saying when arguing about parking with my blue badge is 'Just because you can't see it, doesn't mean it's not there!' - (unless its one of my bad days, and then I can't be bothered with the ignorance of 'know it all's) :x
Keep up the poetry Suncatcher, you're very good at it!!

Love & ((()))'s, Sandra xxx

only49

suncatcher wrote:

You don't look sick

You don't look sick someone cried
A glistened tear springs to the eye
No visual clues like walking stick,
Ignorant comment makes me sick
You’re not really qualified to say
My doctors are so please go away
You cast an eye down my body
You look up you look down
Your mouth curled, eyes frown
You look at me with disbelief
You judge me guilty, Benefit thief!
Never judge a book by its cover
Look beneath the pages you'll discover
I am genuine and really sick
Are you ignorant or just thick?
If you swapped places with me
You would understand and agree
I deserve my benefit, now taken away
Now leave me alone to enjoy my day
By Joanne price
I wrote this last year

hi suncatcher i think that is excellent i could not of put it better, i do think there is still alot of ignorant people out there, just because we get on with it dont mean we are not needing help.

kathbee

So true and to the point Joanne

Well done

Kath x

handsy

Really good, Thats just how I feel most of the time I had a heart attack last week but again its something thats not visible. Its a cruwl world we live in.

Keep your chin up

frogmorton

HI Joanne

What a well-written poem.

It is so approppriate - I bet it made you feel better for getting it down.

Keep up your poetry

Love

Toni xx

suncatcher

handsy wrote:

Really good, Thats just how I feel most of the time I had a heart attack last week but again its something thats not visible. Its a cruwl world we live in.

Keep your chin up

Im sorry to hear about your heart attack thats awful. you never know what is round the next corner wish you all the best with the recovery take it easy best wishes joanne

suncatcher

sanmar63 wrote:

suncatcher wrote:

You don't look sick

You don't look sick someone cried
A glistened tear springs to the eye
No visual clues like walking stick,
Ignorant comment makes me sick
You’re not really qualified to say
My doctors are so please go away
You cast an eye down my body
You look up you look down
Your mouth curled, eyes frown
You look at me with disbelief
You judge me guilty, Benefit thief!
Never judge a book by its cover
Look beneath the pages you'll discover
I am genuine and really sick
Are you ignorant or just thick?
If you swapped places with me
You would understand and agree
I deserve my benefit, now taken away
Now leave me alone to enjoy my day
By Joanne price
I wrote this last year

The poem says it all, my favorite saying when arguing about parking with my blue badge is 'Just because you can't see it, doesn't mean it's not there!' - (unless its one of my bad days, and then I can't be bothered with the ignorance of 'know it all's) :x
Keep up the poetry Suncatcher, you're very good at it!!

Love & ((()))'s, Sandra xxx

Thanks sandra there is a lot of ignorance out there as if we havent enough on our plates from joanne

suncatcher

fester wrote:

very good indeed Joanne, perhaps ATOS so called professionals should read it too. Not that i imagine it would make a difference.
Excellant all the same.

No it wouldnt make a difference. Thanks for reply from joanne

suncatcher

frogmorton wrote:

HI Joanne

What a well-written poem.

It is so approppriate - I bet it made you feel better for getting it down.

Keep up your poetry

Love

Toni xx

It did at the time but i never finished it then and i saw it amongs some written poems of mine not fiished or typed up and thought id finish it.
Ive got to sort all my poems out. They are not all togeather. Im waiting for a very cold day in winter when i am not well with arther and need something to do. Ive got no time now my seeds need watering. Im pleased we have rain saves me a job. thanks joanne

suncatcher

kathbee wrote:

So true and to the point Joanne

Well done

Kath x

Thanks kath hope u are keeping well from joanne