Garden poem
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suncatcher
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Provide me with
A Garden
Where i will dwell
Present me with
Sweet honey suckle
Its fragrance i'll smell
Give me the
Sound of birds
Singing a sweet tune
Bestow me with
A just cut lawn
And the morning dew
Offer me
Chocolate brown soil
To feel,
As it sifts through my hand
Award me with
A leafy tree
To rest after a hard days toil
And grant me
Peace and Tranquillity
As I sit and gaze upon your land
by joanne price
A Garden
Where i will dwell
Present me with
Sweet honey suckle
Its fragrance i'll smell
Give me the
Sound of birds
Singing a sweet tune
Bestow me with
A just cut lawn
And the morning dew
Offer me
Chocolate brown soil
To feel,
As it sifts through my hand
Award me with
A leafy tree
To rest after a hard days toil
And grant me
Peace and Tranquillity
As I sit and gaze upon your land
by joanne price
Joanne
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A super poem, Joanne :!: Very calming and peaceful. I love it0
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Thanks joan hope u are keeping well. from joanneJoanne0
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I can see the progress suncatcher - but do you need an apostrophe in 'ill smell' to make it 'I'll smell'? You are developing your skills well, it's a thoughtful and peaceful poem. DDHave you got the despatches? No, I always walk like this. Eddie Braben0
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dreamdaisy wrote:I can see the progress suncatcher - but do you need an apostrophe in 'ill smell' to make it 'I'll smell'? You are developing your skills well, it's a thoughtful and peaceful poem. DD
Thank you hope you are keeping well also from joanne
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Joanne
Another really nice poem. You are getting very good aalso quicker.
I still cannot find that one you wrote last year. It was so
good.
I remember I told you to do another one. You asked us what could you write about. I said about nature.
You were going to try. I just wish I could remember it.
Waiting for the next one now Joanne
Love Trish xxxx0 -
Hi suncatcher
I'm guessing from the other posts that you wrote this poem
I like it very much.... it has a great feeling of calm, peace and tranquility.
I look forward to reading more of your work0 -
beowolf wrote:Hi suncatcher
I'm guessing from the other posts that you wrote this poem
I like it very much.... it has a great feeling of calm, peace and tranquility.
I look forward to reading more of your work
Hi dont think ive spokent o you before if you are new welcome to the forum.I did write this glad you liked it.
There are a few poets on the forum they have gone quiet for now.
I think they have put down there pens and are too busy out in their gardens, even small holdings.Joanne0 -
trisher wrote:Joanne
Another really nice poem. You are getting very good aalso quicker.
I still cannot find that one you wrote last year. It was so
good.
I remember I told you to do another one. You asked us what could you write about. I said about nature.
You were going to try. I just wish I could remember it.
Waiting for the next one now Joanne
Nature will do i will have a think. We read other poetry term time . I have been sharing mine with the group. I read four out. I had better start writing new material as i will run out. I have got arther poems but ive only put them on here. The library book group are older and i have shared with them a few things about the condition. they seem understanding receptive. I am not sure to share those poems though. It may be too much.
I am glad you liked it trishajoanne
Love Trish xxxxJoanne0 -
Hi Joanne!
Another lovely poem Joanne
I can tell how much you love your garden and what it does FOr you in the words
Love
Toni xx0 -
frogmorton wrote:Hi Joanne!
Another lovely poem Joanne
I can tell how much you love your garden and what it does FOr you in the words
Love
Toni xxJoanne0
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