Garden poem

suncatcher

Provide me with
A Garden
Where i will dwell
Present me with
Sweet honey suckle
Its fragrance i'll smell
Give me the
Sound of birds
Singing a sweet tune
Bestow me with
A just cut lawn
And the morning dew
Offer me
Chocolate brown soil
To feel,
As it sifts through my hand
Award me with
A leafy tree
To rest after a hard days toil
And grant me
Peace and Tranquillity
As I sit and gaze upon your land
by joanne price

joanlawson

A super poem, Joanne :!: Very calming and peaceful. I love it

suncatcher

Thanks joan hope u are keeping well. from joanne

dreamdaisy

I can see the progress suncatcher - but do you need an apostrophe in 'ill smell' to make it 'I'll smell'? You are developing your skills well, it's a thoughtful and peaceful poem. DD

suncatcher

dreamdaisy wrote:

I can see the progress suncatcher - but do you need an apostrophe in 'ill smell' to make it 'I'll smell'? You are developing your skills well, it's a thoughtful and peaceful poem. DD

Apostrophe sorted thanks Thank you hope you are keeping well also from joanne

trisher

Joanne

Another really nice poem. You are getting very good aalso quicker.

I still cannot find that one you wrote last year. It was so
good.

I remember I told you to do another one. You asked us what could you write about. I said about nature.

You were going to try. I just wish I could remember it.

Waiting for the next one now Joanne

Love Trish xxxx

beowolf

Hi suncatcher

I'm guessing from the other posts that you wrote this poem

I like it very much.... it has a great feeling of calm, peace and tranquility.

I look forward to reading more of your work

suncatcher

beowolf wrote:

Hi suncatcher

I'm guessing from the other posts that you wrote this poem

I like it very much.... it has a great feeling of calm, peace and tranquility.

I look forward to reading more of your work

Hi dont think ive spokent o you before if you are new welcome to the forum. I did write this glad you liked it.
There are a few poets on the forum they have gone quiet for now.
I think they have put down there pens and are too busy out in their gardens, even small holdings.

suncatcher

trisher wrote:

Joanne

Another really nice poem. You are getting very good aalso quicker.

I still cannot find that one you wrote last year. It was so
good.

I remember I told you to do another one. You asked us what could you write about. I said about nature.

You were going to try. I just wish I could remember it.

Waiting for the next one now Joanne

Nature will do i will have a think. We read other poetry term time . I have been sharing mine with the group. I read four out. I had better start writing new material as i will run out. I have got arther poems but ive only put them on here. The library book group are older and i have shared with them a few things about the condition. they seem understanding receptive. I am not sure to share those poems though. It may be too much.
I am glad you liked it trisha joanne

Love Trish xxxx

frogmorton

Hi Joanne!

Another lovely poem Joanne

I can tell how much you love your garden and what it does FOr you in the words

Love

Toni xx

suncatcher

frogmorton wrote:

Hi Joanne!

Another lovely poem Joanne

I can tell how much you love your garden and what it does FOr you in the words

Love

Toni xx

Thanks i find it like theropy the garden does me good every time i go in it. Glad u like it from joanne