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valval
valval Member Posts: 14,911
edited 7. Nov 2012, 15:33 in Community Chit-chat archive
well peeps i need a disraction at moment so decided it time for a new story feel free to add to and see where we go


it was a cold damp dark day she stood looking over the town wlth such fear. her hair was damp against her scull you could not tell the colour, she had rips in her clothing and had lost a shoe. but she stood there as still as could be.
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  • tjt6768
    tjt6768 Member Posts: 12,170
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    Could it be??
    There, on the horizon, the very distinct shape, the Abbey... :o
    Had she really wondered so far from home??

    Bedraggled, she gathered what was left of her composure and headed down the hill toward the Gothic behemoth
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  • valval
    valval Member Posts: 14,911
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    the fog was swirling around the trees as she approached what was that ,did something move , not so sure she was still alone she stops and listens
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  • stickywicket
    stickywicket Member Posts: 27,717
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    It was a kind of rustling bustling, whirling swirling, hooting tooting noise and it seemed to be coming from....
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  • Airwave!
    Airwave! Member Posts: 2,466
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    The abby loomed large, darker than the grey/black sky of night, larger than the surrounding buildings nestling against the abby and seemingly supporting it, pushing it up to stand against the night, its angles jutting into the wind and separating the shrouds of mist still enveloping the darkness. A owl hooted and disturbed the howl of the wind, a rival answered across the ether and aroused the sleeping dogs of fear.....


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  • valval
    valval Member Posts: 14,911
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    she sat down and rested, it had taken so long to get this far should she go on will the end of the journey be worth taking the risk.a shiver ran up her back was it sensible being here on her own no one knows where she is. will it be safe who will be there.
    enough of this putting it off time to move on the end is close just around the next turning and she will know why she felt driven to come all this way.
    val
  • marrianne
    marrianne Member Posts: 1,161
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    despite her mission the girl was drawn towards the Abbey ,as its gothic walls were becoming obscured by the dense swirling fog the mist had become thick and foul smelling and as the cold and sulphuric damp seeped through the girls megre garb she felt her bowels twist in terror .....AS
  • Airwave!
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    the tiny hairs on her arms joined the silken hair on her neck and stood raised to a feeling of terror, she knew not what, only that, that horror of horrors of life was near, it was unavoidable and it would bring pain beyond forbearance...

    Her eyes were heavy with terror, the act of raising her head was too much to bear, a movement she could not bring herself to do or generate the effort to start the commission, of which would instigate her death.

    The instrument of life called to her, she could hear her mother singing out her refrain, straining across the wind as it tore the words in half and subjected them to a wind as sharp as a butchers knife.
  • valval
    valval Member Posts: 14,911
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    the minuets stretched and time moved so slow but at last she decided it was time to see what lay ahead, the past is all well and good but the future is there who knows if it will be a long or short one but only one way for her to find out. so step by step she moved forward catching a glimpse of a cloaked figure up ahead was it a man it was hard to tell it seemed to be glideing along that could not be true must be a trick of the light.
    val
  • marrianne
    marrianne Member Posts: 1,161
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    As her leaden steps forced her shivering body inexorably towards the cloaked figure,the light became brighter ,the fog seemed to lift ,and her spirit soared higher than the bats which swooped and
  • valval
    valval Member Posts: 14,911
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    then she saw him in all his Glory the light was shinning from him so much it it hurt to look straight at him who was this man where did he come from what did he want with her. she lifted her hand to shade her eyes never shifting her gaze.
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  • marrianne
    marrianne Member Posts: 1,161
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    as he stretched out a gloved hand towards her ,She felt so peaceful all the terror had left her body ,the light in front burned with a beauty she had never seen before and sweet music from the Abbey filled her head and heart with joy
  • ichabod6
    ichabod6 Member Posts: 843
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    He pushed the pub door open and guided her to the bar.
    He smiled and said "I'm having a pint of Boddingtons. What
    would you like? "
    "oo" she replied, "could I have a big vodka and coke and some
    cheese and onion crisps?"
  • marrianne
    marrianne Member Posts: 1,161
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    and has anyone found a shoe ?
  • valval
    valval Member Posts: 14,911
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    then her knight in shinning armour passed her a shoe and said does this fit wench.
    wench she thought who is he coming out with such a word shame on him so she threw her drink over him and stormed off to the ladies
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  • marrianne
    marrianne Member Posts: 1,161
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    Lit by one flickering candle ,she groped her way ,difficult with crossed legs and one killer heeled shoe ,The ladies with its wooden seat which pinched as she sat down ,came from another age ,the news paper attached to the rusting nail seemed to offer a clue .
  • valval
    valval Member Posts: 14,911
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    what was she doing in such a dive she thinks to her self she should have stayed in town with her mates where the power worked.
    then the lights flickered on and a loud cheer went up.
    she washed her hands and dry-ed them (just as her mum had taught her) opening the door she got such a surprise a band had started to play there were people every where all having the time of there lives where had they come from looking around there clothing was a little strange and the music from a bye gone age
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  • Airwave!
    Airwave! Member Posts: 2,466
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    .....the credits started to roll, 3rd grip was Bill Smith, head of catering was Joyce C Never, Artistic Director was Banksy, everyone stood up and rushed to the exits before the National Anthem started. The sound of a roll of film speeding up as it came loose from its anchorage on the machine, a sudden peace enveloped the room or was it the sound of..........
  • Colin1
    Colin1 Member Posts: 1,769
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    She was more confused than ever would her memory never return, out of the corner of her eye she caught sight of the band as they where leaving she recognised them it was the Brighouse and Rastic Brass band, slowly it began to come back to her in her mind pictures of Foggy, Clegg and yes it Compo she realised at once that she was Nora Batty. Had she been sent here by the ?
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  • marrianne
    marrianne Member Posts: 1,161
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    Makers of first OF the Autumn Ale the new and equaly dull Yorkshire rural trip down memery lane ,looking down expecting to see mouse brown wrinkled stockings and grubby garters ,but instead she was thrilled to see ....
  • Airwave!
    Airwave! Member Posts: 2,466
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    Mini Caldwell dancing down the street with a bunch of new flowers held aloft, followed by Hughie Green with a bunch of £20 notes in his hand next to Max Bygraves with the most awful jumper on and singing about...roses?

    She shook her head to clear her mind and the voice of an angel held her attention, clearer now, through the mists of time, the strange dreams seemed to have gained a basis in reality beyond which she couldn't move....

    She looked up and saw........
  • marrianne
    marrianne Member Posts: 1,161
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    Donald Trump , along with Alan Sugar and Annie Sugden ,paralised with fear she ran ......well hobbled as fast as she could ........her one clog sparking merry hell over the cobbled stones
  • barbara12
    barbara12 Member Posts: 21,281
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    then she woke from this awful dream only to find that there were petals and banknotes on the floor..so she hurriedly got dressed and rang her dear friend, Im on my way he said
    Love
    Barbara
  • marrianne
    marrianne Member Posts: 1,161
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    Simon cowell , he really was one of her very best friends from school his biography the nasty one he had dedicated it to her .
  • marrianne
    marrianne Member Posts: 1,161
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    he really was on his way ....... :lol:
  • ichabod6
    ichabod6 Member Posts: 843
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    "Bugger me," thought the chap as he ordered another pint of
    Boddingtons "I didnt realise she would get so splattered on a
    double vodka."
    He turned to the girl, "Would you like another, or shall we go
    for some fish and chips?"
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