Kitty Member Posts: 3,583
edited 25. Nov 2016, 08:26 in Community Chit-chat archive

tears she cried
all day long.
Courage she sighed,
through nightfall's throng.
These tortured bones
and screaming tones
are monotonous.

They give me drugs
she cries.
"They'll stop your pain."
They lied.
But it's of no surprise
to find each day she tries.

Kathleen Thorpe


  • frogmorton
    frogmorton Member Posts: 28,487
    edited 30. Nov -1, 00:00
    Oh Kath :(

    This is a sad poem. The utter loneliness of pain-filled nights.

    BUT hope is in there in the strength of the woman who carries on every day despite her pain.

    Beautifully written.

    Thank you

    Toni xxx ((()))
  • Kitty
    Kitty Member Posts: 3,583
    edited 30. Nov -1, 00:00
    Thank you Sharon, thai's really appreciated. xx
  • barbara12
    barbara12 Member Posts: 21,280
    edited 30. Nov -1, 00:00
    Kath that is so moving..the nights are the worse hope things improve for you then you can get that well earned sleep..xx
  • stickywicket
    stickywicket Member Posts: 27,413
    edited 30. Nov -1, 00:00
    You have managed to create something pretty from something ugly. Well done, Kath.
  • dachshund
    dachshund Member Posts: 8,593
    edited 30. Nov -1, 00:00
    you have said how it is very true its only people who have it know what its really like and you cope very well.
    take care
    joan xx
  • dreamdaisy
    dreamdaisy Member Posts: 31,520
    edited 30. Nov -1, 00:00
    What tremendous words, they capture the dark moments so well. I hope that those who can will move it to the poetry sticky at the top of this board. DD