You dont look sick poem

suncatcher
suncatcher Member Posts: 2,174
edited 15. Jul 2010, 19:31 in Community Chit-chat archive
You don't look sick someone cried
A glistened tear springs to the eye
No visual clues like walking stick,
Ignorant comment makes me sick
You’re not really qualified to say
My doctors are so please go away
You cast an eye down my body
You look up you look down
Your mouth curled, eyes frown
You look at me with disbelief
You judge me guilty, Benefit thief!
Never judge a book by its cover
Look beneath the pages you'll discover
I am genuine and really sick
Are you ignorant or just thick?
If you swapped places with me
You would understand and agree
I deserve my benefit, now taken away
Now leave me alone to enjoy my day

By Joanne price
wrote this last year
Joanne

Comments

  • ninakang
    ninakang Member Posts: 1,367
    edited 30. Nov -0001, 00:00
    I loved that poem and can really identify with it.

    Nx
  • joanlawson
    joanlawson Member Posts: 8,681
    edited 30. Nov -0001, 00:00
    Well done Joanne :D:D That was quite a cry from the heart, wasn't it?
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  • suncatcher
    suncatcher Member Posts: 2,174
    edited 30. Nov -0001, 00:00
    ninakang wrote:
    I loved that poem and can really identify with it.

    Nx
    thanks nina
    Joanne
  • suncatcher
    suncatcher Member Posts: 2,174
    edited 30. Nov -0001, 00:00
    joanlawson wrote:
    Well done Joanne :D:D That was quite a cry from the heart, wasn't it?

    I wrote part of it last year and ive found it written finished it and typed it up. Yes it was one from the heart made me feel good to write it out thanks from joanne
    Joanne
  • trisher
    trisher Member Posts: 9,263
    edited 30. Nov -0001, 00:00
    Joanne

    That is really good. You are so good at this. I wish I could find that other one you wrote. It was very good.

    You said that you did not know what else to write about. I suggested nature and you were going to try it.

    I still have not found it beut will keep trying to find it for you.

    Trish xxx
  • suncatcher
    suncatcher Member Posts: 2,174
    edited 30. Nov -0001, 00:00
    trisher wrote:
    Joanne

    That is really good. You are so good at this. I wish I could find that other one you wrote. It was very good.

    You said that you did not know what else to write about. I suggested nature and you were going to try it.

    I still have not found it beut will keep trying to find it for you.

    Trish xxx

    I havent wrote many arther poems so i dont think it was one of them. As arther is not a chearful thing to write about but good to get him out of system.
    I have a boat poem not finished nature there with the sea. will have to find that note pad out. I will have to get writing.
    x joanne
    Joanne
  • trisher
    trisher Member Posts: 9,263
    edited 30. Nov -0001, 00:00
    Joanne

    Yes keep writing when you have the time. You have a way with words.

    Love Trish xx

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